Talk:Electus Matari (Player alliance)

Contents

Work Needed

The Oath of Loyalty to the Minmatar Republic

Including this seems like gratuitous padding to the page.

The page should convey information about the Electus Matari alliance itself. The Oath hasn't got any kind of official connection to the alliance itself but is just something some pilots take. Chopping it out might make the page more readable and pertinent. --Evanda Char 23:44, 8 February 2009 (UTC)

The Charter

I think we need to look at this, as unless an AURORA NPC popped up and chartered us, we can't really say that we have a charter from Republic Parliament. --Evanda Char 23:56, 8 February 2009 (UTC)

Campaign History

Looks terrible and is incomplete. --Evanda Char 00:04, 9 February 2009 (UTC)

Articles of interest

Need to clean this up and purge articles that aren't actually about the alliance itself, but are about individual members, such as all the "ZOMG 3ll3 is sooo hawt" stuff, which pretty much had bugger all to do with the alliance itself. --Evanda Char 00:04, 9 February 2009 (UTC)

General Comments

All in all, needs tidying up, making informative rather than just a spam of links, while strongly relevant info needs to be on the page rather than linked out.--Evanda Char 00:01, 9 February 2009 (UTC)